<p>My essay is about an innocent man being hanged (true story). After reading, ^^ that’s what my GC said. He thought it was risky. But I really want to know what others think. Anyone?</p>
<p>I also need it read quick. Anyone? Would really appreciate the feedback.</p>
<p>It sounds interesting. I can critique it if you want. I’ve already submitted my transfer application to Cornell, so I just came out of essay critiquing myself. (You can see me in the transfer thread “so who’s applying to cornell spring 09?” I believe I start posting in the 7th page) Just give me a PM.</p>
<p>transferstudent9, I pm’ed it to you. :)</p>
<p>I’ll read it and give you suggestions if you do the same for me? :)</p>
<p>Sure. I just pm’ed mine to you.</p>
<p>Really an interesting read, I advise anyone else who has a few spare minutes to read it as well.</p>
<p>I’ll take a look if you’d like. (Full disclosure: I’m applying EA to MIT)</p>
<p>pm me and i’ll give it a look</p>
<p>hectorbo, please check your inbox.</p>
<p>im interested. send it over boy</p>
<p>Just woke up. :P</p>
<p>So, I sent you all my essay. Please respond as soon as possible. Cornell ED deadline is about 50 hours away…</p>
<p>i would love to read this. I’m applying to JHU ED. So no need to worry about me :D</p>
<p>@Hope2getrice, Sent! Btw, shouldn’t you be apply to rice ED?. Good luck anyways.</p>
<p>transferstudent9 and Hope2getrice, Thanks a lot for critique. I’ll work on it further.</p>
<p>Send me your essay and I’ll help. I also PMed you my essay when you posted in my thread. Please PM me when you’ve read it, as I also need to catch the early deadline. Thanks!</p>
<p>I’ll read it</p>
<p>Sent both of you my essay. Thanks!</p>
<p>you want help?
i am a gramar nerd. so hooks me up</p>
<p>Haha well, you may be a grammar nerd but you definitely are not a spelling nerd :-p</p>