get i get some opinion

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<p>i know that it’s unusual (or even lame) but i want an adult’s view on my essay. My parents aren’t that good at english and i don’t have english till next semester. </p>

<p>So basically, i’m not asking you to read the whole essay, just the conclusion (i’ll just tell me generally what the essay is about). I want to know if you think i showed enough of myself as a person. </p>

<p>Anyone want to give it a read? its short. =)</p>

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<p>oops, i misspelled a word in the title and in the second paragraph. it should be “can” instead of “get” and “tell you” instead of “tell me”</p>

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<p>This should be in the Parents Forum, not the Parent Cafe.</p>

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<p>I’ll give you an honest opinion. PM me.</p>

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<p>^^sorry, can some mod move this thread then</p>