<p>I’m getting started on my common app/UC Berkeley essays so I have enough time to make changes as I grow as a writer… Can someone who’s been accepted read over my essay about “The World I’ve Grown Up In” and give me some criticism? I’d really appreciate it C:</p>
<p>I’ll PM it to whoever responds.</p>
<p>feel free to send it to me.</p>
<p>I’ll have a look.</p>
<p>Also, check out this site. It was very useful when I was writing my UC essays.</p>
<p>[Essays</a>, Admission Information, Undergraduate Admission, U.Va.](<a href=“http://www.virginia.edu/undergradadmission/writingtheessay.html]Essays”>http://www.virginia.edu/undergradadmission/writingtheessay.html)</p>