Getting an Early Start for Fall 2013 - Essays!

<p>I'm getting started on my common app/UC Berkeley essays so I have enough time to make changes as I grow as a writer... Can someone who's been accepted read over my essay about "The World I've Grown Up In" and give me some criticism? I'd really appreciate it C:</p>

<p>I'll PM it to whoever responds.</p>

<p>feel free to send it to me.</p>

<p>I'll have a look.</p>

<p>Also, check out this site. It was very useful when I was writing my UC essays.</p>

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