good appeal letter ?

<p>My name is __ and I am writing to ask you to reconsider your office’s decision to suspend my financial aid for the upcoming 2014-15 school year. My financial aid was suspended due to my low GPA And my completion ratio.</p>

<p>The fall and spring semester was one of the stressful school year i have had in a while i had to take on a role that i was not use to i became a parent to my younger siblings due to my mothers new job and longer hours. Before i get into detail about the situation just know i am a hardworking student with a great ability to succeed i am the first generation to graduate high school and attend college. I began a new job to help my mother pay the bills due to this job scheduling my hours within my class schedule i was unable to attend classes. And dropped my math class , going into the spring semester i did not recall receiving a warning of my financial aid i began to take more classes because i transferred my job from full-time to part-time and my boss promised they would work by my class schedule but due to lost co-workers i was once again put on schedule to work hours i wasn’t able to work most days i did call out but i couldn’t risk losing the money after making a strict decisions this past month i decided to resign from my job and only work weekends at my church so that i can focus more on school,also my older brother has come back from the army to help out until he goes back on duty which makes it much easier for me to focus on my future and my work towards my education. It would be a blessing to further my education with the help of financial aid.</p>