Got Accepted (OOS)

<p>Hope this should help some of the people being worried about OOS, this should give some comparison.</p>

<p>1st Choice: Communications; Pre-Journalism 2nd Choice: Undeclared Business</p>

<p>GPA- 4.31/3.86
Class Rank- 23/502
ACT- 29</p>

<p>Extracurriculars: Volleyball, Boy Scouts (Eagle Scout), Key Club (Class Director), Newspaper (Editor), Math Comp. Team, Model UN (and other political sims), Church Youth Group, Altar Serving for Church.</p>

<p>I didn’t send in a resume, or any letters of recommendation. Filled out the app the last night before it was due. </p>

<p>Essays #1</p>

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<p>Essay 2:</p>

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<p>Hope this helps someone.</p>

<p>Heres mine as well (although I’m not going to dig up my essays): </p>

<p>OOS (Virginia)</p>

<p>Academics:</p>

<p>GPA - Unweighted: 3.80
GPA - Weighted: 4.51
Class Rank: top 10% (26/500)
Class Size: 500</p>

<p>Scores:</p>

<p>SAT I Math: 690
SAT I Critical Reading: 700
SAT I Writing: 660</p>

<p>Extracurriculars:</p>

<p>Significant Extracurriculars: - FCCLA (Treasurer: 10th, Vice President: 11th, President: 12th)

  • Ecology Club (Vice President: 11th)
  • Science Club (Historian: 11th, Secretary and Treasurer: 12th)
  • Peer Helpers
  • Medical Club
    Leadership positions: In extracurriculars
    Volunteer/Service Work: Over 200 hours at various facilities
    Honors and Awards: - High PSAT Award (Top 5% in county)
  • All- District Choir
  • French National Honor Society
  • National Honor Society
  • Health and PE Departemental Award
  • Honor Roll every school year</p>

<p>If I were you I’d take your essays off. Shouldn’t put them in public places. Anyways, the first sentence of your essay has a huge grammatical mistake… didnt read farther than that. =P</p>

<p>Here essays are actually not that revealing. And some people may want to compare how they wrtoe their essays to how she wrote theirs.</p>

<p>Oh, and I had way more grammatical mistakes than she did- her a much better.</p>

<p>I believe it’s more of a plagarism issue why the suggest that essays aren’t in public places…</p>

<p>And yes there is a dangling modifier (and that’s probably the first time I’ve ever used that phrase in a real conversation) but WHO REALLY CARES! Most students speak and write very colloquially, and it’s easy to understand what the intention was. They are not English teacher grading grammatical structures, they are trying to see how clearly you think and write. The applicant has done very well.</p>

<p>Dangling modifiers are also very common mistakes and not one any adcom would be nitpicking over. If you started your essays as follows, it would be different: ‘Here is the reazons why I wants to go in ur skool nxt yr. lol.’</p>

<p>If anyone wants to steal my essays, thats their prerogative. If they have to steal someone else’s essay for their college apps, they probably aren’t going to get in for other reasons. </p>

<p>If I was still in the process of applying, I wouldn’t post my essays here, but I’m already accepted, so I don’t see what harm it can do me.</p>

<p>hey congrats,
to the OP, did you get accepted to your 1st major??</p>

<p>Yeah, I got into my first choice.</p>

<p>Congratulations OP. I freak out at small things.</p>

<p>cbulla - what state are you from?</p>

<p>Re: feladis</p>

<p>I believe you meant “further”.</p>

<p>;-)</p>

<p>^ I believe you meant ‘" … further.’" (period inside quotation marks)
lol =]</p>

<p>My comments on CC arent my admissions essays =P</p>

<p>rofl. what are you guys babbling about?</p>

<p>I’m from Wisconsin.</p>