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<p>Sandy Kempners rendition of his time in Vietnam makes evident that his placement in war is more forceful than voluntary. His use of numerous rhetorical techniques establishes the negative attitude that he has towards war. Sarcasm, parallelism, and satire effectively make this letter home a successful example of an anti-war sentiment.
Sandy immediately begins his letter describing how an abortion called Operation Jackson was a walk in the sun. Typically, this metaphor is used to symbolize the ease of task; however, we know this task was anything but easy. This play on syntax brings out a humorous tone with a vicariously petty feeling, showing Sandys true attitude towards war. It becomes clear that his sarcasm is establishing his placement in Vietnam. He goes on to explain how he and his team were very successful after they have managed to kill a few probably innocent civilians, find a few caves, and burn a few houses, all in a driving rainstorm. The authors eerie sarcasm is shown when the notion of very successful is used in the context of killing innocent civilians. One knows that when an innocent civilian is killed, success is the furthest thing from being accomplished. This would correlate to describing the deaths of the victims on September 11, 2001, as being highly successful; we unanimously know otherwise.
To grab the attention of his readers and give structural similarities, Sandy Kempner uses parallelism in his letter. He describes how he spent a three-day walk in the sun (and paddies and fields and mountains and impenetrable jungle and saw grass and ants, and screwed-up radios
and, and, and). By using this unique technique he shows that the three-days were not a walk in the sun; instead, they were a heavy sprint into a plethora of unsatisfaction. The repetition of and only prolongs the sentence, making his journey seem unsatisfying.
Sandy Kempners last attempt at a meaningful letter is to use satire to address his family. He enthusiastically engages in the description of the brutal war which creates imagery. He describes the 14,000 meter forced march on a hard road, and the $50,000 worth of ammo, virtually wasted on a single shooting; readers feel the hard road and smell the excess gunpowder. His voice in regards for reform or ridicule establishes his position well, which shows that he is against war.
The Vietnam War has inevitably caused Sandy Kempner to write a letter home that would touch the lives of anyone reading it. His vast description of the hardships and pain faced during war bring out his true attitude, successfully establishing his letter as one of an anti-war sentiment.</p>