@Daemonox , yeah I’m aware it’s a bit short. I just am not that fast of a writer 
Okay, I was planning on having 2 examples and I included another one in my intro but I ran out of time so I had to cross that part out.
As for the vocab, I usually just write down the words that pop into my head first, which usually aren’t vocab words. Do you have any tips for including those?
@metsfan9 : Okay, thanks for your input! I was planning to have another example but I ran out of time unfortunately
Ahaha, I think that’s cause I recently had a test on that stuff so it’s all stuck in my head right now. 
What do you think I could improve on besides having another examples that would help me get a 6?