Grade First Essay

<p>Thanks in advance.
Essay Topic:
The Internet makes doing research much easier.
The Internet makes doing research dangerous.
Pretty bland</p>

<p>The Internet has allowed research to be done much easier. The Internet has allowed the average student in a home setting to be able to access all the knowledge or research needed. The Internet has been an utopia of knowledge throughout society. The evidence throughout society to support this statement is pervasive.
The Internet has allowed research to be done at a much better convenience than former generations who were always forced to go out to the library and borrow a numerous amount of books for a simple research paper. In correlation, grade point averages have shot up astoundingly from the vast collection of knowledge available on the Internet.
The Internet has made the current generation’s research much easier than former generations. If a student were to research a book such as “To Kill a Mockingbird,” the Internet would allow a much wider array of sources to be available to the the student. Without the Internet, literature analysis of “To Kill a Mockingbird,” would have to be done by oneself or a study group. But with the Internet, research wcan be done simply from one’s home with a wide variety of sources.
Throughout my education, the Internet has provided to be a wealth of knowledge that has been always at my disposal. The Internet has made research a much easier task. In correlation, grade point averages have steadily rose. The amount of different sources the Internet has at any given moment is unmatched. The Internet has made research a much easier task for everyone.
Research has been made much more accomodating to the normal person from the Internet. Not only does the Internet allow a steadfast amount of resources to be available to use but the Internet has been very accomodating in return. Grades have shot up. The Internet, if anything, has improved education.</p>

<p>Just simply terrible…:confused: absolute failure</p>

<p>your not serious are you. but if you are, starting ever sentence with the internet is not a good idea.</p>

<p>You are doomed for life my brother.</p>

<p>Maybe not listening to Slipknot ever again is a start towards establishing an education.</p>

<p>hey dude nyker you have a 1270 sat on the freaking 2400 THATS 52 % i dont care if i got a 2 on the essay it i would still get better than a 1270 how do you have the nerve to call me a ■■■■■■ when i am scoring 28% higher with my 1290/1600 than you AND I DONT EVEN STUDY FOR THE SAT. I study and i get a 2000 once i get a tutor for the essay. My grade on the 1600 without the essay is higher than your entire 2400.
NYker06
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Location: NEW YORK
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<p>=( i hate the SAT it is WAY too long and ridiculously hard…it doesnt show the truth
The SAT doesn’t show the kind of student you are. I usually get at least strong B+ grades on everything (87-88) if not the occassional 90, but on the SAT i got absolutely slaughtered…I pulled a 1270 adding every section up from the new SAT including the essay and grammar. When I saw the average for this new SAT was around 1500, I freaked. I am frightened that if I don’t get my SAT score up by at least 500-600 points that I will end up at a community college. It’s terrible how much weight some schools put on this evil test…can anyone tell me if it is really THAT important to get in?
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<p>The essay topic was freaking stupid bro all the other tests I have taken with no essay and i pull at least a 1300/1600 this was my worse score yet from the damn essay wasting my energy i hope they get rid of the stupid essay it is pointless thank you for the advice 400 metres im going to take a class on the essay writing soon enough… nyker i don’t know what your problem is i have looked at all your other posts and all you do is criticize everyone i know the essay sucked it was my first sat essay im in honors english and soon enough i am going to have a tutor maybe you should pull up your 1270/2400 instead of posting on cc all the time.</p>

<p>plz close this im going to write my second essay tomorrow and see how high i can get</p>

<p>SAT score doesn’t show intelligence, as many smart kids don’t do well on it or just simply average. SAT’s simply show how well you can perform on 1 4 hour test that is too long to begin with.</p>

<p>sure… and you criticize me? are you a hypocrite dude i get a higher score than you and bomb the essay and all of a sudden the SAT is bad? have fun at community college.</p>

<p>No stress, aptitude, endurance. Those are the keys to the new SAT.</p>

<p>Slipkn0t, you need to learn how to deal with criticism. If you only want people to praise your ****ty essay, then don’t make a topic asking for it to be graded.</p>

<p>1) Don’t focus on the internet
2) It’s too short
3) The examples aren’t fully explained in any detail
4) Lack of vocabulary and sentence structure</p>

<p>GL improving though, you can do it, just get a prep book and look at 5-6 examples!</p>

<p>ty glucose this was probably the stupidest essay i ever wrote but with what new SAT book should I focus on? I have Princeton Review which I find somewhat decent…</p>

<p>Buy the REAL SAT book, its from collegeboard.</p>

<ol>
<li>stop flaming, but</li>
<li>to say the truth nyker shouldn’t have been that critical but of you there was no reason to start ranting about the SATs . . . and sorry, but that essay just isn’t that great.</li>
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<p>nah man I love the SATs the old ones that is but who cares essay is just practice practice ive written so many essays but never for the sat but you should see nykers posts all he does is flame everyone and he is going to community college with a 3.2 1270 sat unless he is giving a million dollar donation lol…</p>

<p>well instead of bashing him and browsing his posts, why don’t you work more on improving your own score? wouldn’t that be much better?</p>

<p>in 2 hours i retake the 2400 with essay ill post that essay on this thread</p>