Grade my AP Lang essay on the 1-9 scale?

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<p>first click on essay part 1, then read essay part 2.
Is my analysis in depth enough? do i address audience purpose and strategy? and does my point make sense?
the prompt is to charactarize Didion’s view of the winds.</p>

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