Grade my Essay Please? (if you want, I can grade back)

Test Preparation
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<p>Can you grade my essay</p>

<p><a href=“https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B2RRXii0LVQKSmItYUFfT2hocmM/edit?usp=sharing[/url]”>https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B2RRXii0LVQKSmItYUFfT2hocmM/edit?usp=sharing&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

<p>It can be found at that link. Sorry for the poor quality of my scanner.</p>

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<p>Does anybody have any input whatsoever?</p>

3

<p>Come on… Please.</p>

4

<p>Bbbbbbuuuuuuummmmmmmpppppp</p>

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<ol>
<li>Your final specific example (Ghandi vs. the Brits) doesn’t really answer the question at hand. While it shows a basic knowledge of the time period, you don’t say enough about either of them to convey a coherent point. The other examples are significantly better in that they go into enough depth for the reader to see how they connect to the question. Still, your second example is more about people working together than working towards a greater goal. There are also several grammar mistakes in the essay. Overall, the essay would benefit from a more specific focus, but it manages to choose a side and push for that side quite nicely.</li>
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<p>Pretty Solid 4.</p>

7

<p>I’d go 7-8/12</p>