Grade my essay please!

Test Preparation SAT Preparation
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<p>Prompt : Nature (one’s genetic inheritance) affects one’s character and behavior more than nurture (one’s life experiences).</p>

<p>Assignment : What are your thoughts on the statement above? </p>

<p>The first link is the first page and the second link is the second page: (click on the image in the link to zoom)
<a href=“http://i28.■■■■■■■.com/2pqs87p.jpg[/url]”>http://i28.■■■■■■■.com/2pqs87p.jpg&lt;/a&gt;
<a href=“http://i32.■■■■■■■.com/2qdmmj5.jpg[/url]”>http://i32.■■■■■■■.com/2qdmmj5.jpg&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

<p>Please score me from 1-6 and give suggestions on anything you feel I should improve on(be a bit specific if you can please).</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

<p>edit: if you have trouble reading it, let me know and ill type it</p>

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<p>bump…</p>

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<p>im desperate for feedback please</p>

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<p>I don’t feel like reading it, sorry. However, it would help if you typed it up instead. Therefore, more people will be prone to reading it. :)</p>

<p>And is this an actual Collegeboard exam free-response? If so, provide the full statement and question.</p>