<p>Thank you so much for your feedback! I’ll be honest, I’m a bit disappointed. What do you think is the distinction between my essay and a perfect 12 like this one - <a href=“Please grade essay on questioning authority - SAT Preparation - College Confidential Forums”>http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/sat-preparation/857789-please-grade-essay-on-questioning-authority.html</a></p>
<p>What should I work on?</p>