<p>Please grade my synthesis essay, and be as critical as you want! (but don’t be overtly critical, be serious in letting me know what you think it would get…) Let me know how good it is on a scale of 9! </p>
<p>Here is the prompt: develop a position on the most important consideration in granting suffrage to women in America.</p>
<p>here is my essay:</p>
<p>The Declaration of Independence states that all men are created equal- and many have said that this treatment extends to all people. The most important consideration in granting suffrage to women in America is if women deserve suffrage or not- if women are endowed with inalienable rights, which include suffrage, or if women should not be able to vote because the US constitution may not necessarily grant suffrage to anyone and women should remain in a separate sphere.</p>
<pre><code>Susan B. Anthony argues that the most important consideration of granting the women the right to vote is that all men are created equal and that the right to vote is an assertion to the natural right of all to the ballot. The most important consideration in granting women the right to vote is how everyone has equal rights, and government should not infringe on these rights.
Judge Ward Hunt argues that If the right (to vote) belongs to any particular person, it is because such person is entitled to it by laws of the State where he chooses to exercise it. However, this states rights position is unequal because it guarantees a state can make any laws prohibiting suffrage that the states want, such as prohibiting a law that refuses the right to vote to someone just because they have brown hair. The states rights position advanced by Judge Ward as the most important consideration of granting suffrage to women is flawed because it does not support the inalienable rights (Source A) supported in the Declaration of Independence.
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<p>Ever since the time of the colonials and earlier, there was an inherent belief of a separate sphere for women, which was defined as being a housewife and taking care of the children. Women were not allowed to vote because women were presumed to be less intelligent than men. However, women who devote their attention to broader interests will cease to be vain and frivolous (Source F), will be able to make accurate decisions about the government if they are given the interest of political participation through suffrage.</p>
<pre><code>The most important consideration in granting womens suffrage should be whether they deserve the right to vote. As people and members of the US government, they certainly do and should not be confined to a separate sphere.
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<p>The only thing on here, the to vote is supposed to be in brackets, but idk how to do that on computer. Thanks a lot in advance for your help!</p>