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We only value things when we lose them or when they are not with us. The same can be said regarding people. Only once we are away from them, momentarily or temporarily, is when we realize their true value.
A young kid who is all set for his first day of school is just a perfect example in this case. This child, who has been pampered day in and day out by his mother does not value his mothers love and care when she is present. But when he goes to school he is filled with apprehensions as he is surrounded by strangers and doesn’t receive the same love and care that he used. That is when he wails. Not out of fear. But because he remembers and starts to value his mother from that moment. Momentarily though.
Another example is of a teenage kid. Going to high school. ( forgot what I wrote)
Third was regarding Jim from the book called Ultimate Gift who realizes the value of his father only after his death.
Please lemme know please

The prompt was should we stay alone for sometime to realize the true value of people around us?

We can’t grade an essay that’s only partially written.

But were the examples apt?

@bodangles

Who knows? What was the prompt?

And you’re supposed to use concrete examples from history, literature, or your own experience. Not hypotheticals.