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<p>Living for a little over 18 years, I have observed a phenomenon. Children leave the common board games to television cartoons. Teenagers begin to text message instead of passing a handwritten note. Music players become smaller in size, yet bigger in capacity. Computers are designed by humans, but more accurate than humans. As I progress through life, I see that more and more people are taking advantage of the technological era that we are living in, utilizing innovations that didnt exist just a decade ago.</p>
<p>Because I, too, play video games, send text messages, use iPods, and rely on computers. The community in which I was born in has evolved into one that has utilizes technology to change its way of life. People can complete work more efficiently, communicate quicker, and gain more leisure options. As I experience this growing reliance on electronics, I began to develop a new interest in this revolutionized status quo. I want to dive into the world of technology, immersing myself with new knowledge and innovative ideas, so that I can also make a contribution. In the past I have only watched my surroundings, but for the future, I am m looking forward.</p>