Grammar Problem in my Essay

College Essays
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<p>Which one is correct?
-Constantly willing to try new things, to explore and feel the world and, more importantly, to dare, they always view the world positively.
-Constantly willing to try new things, to explore and feel the world and, more importantly, to dare - they always view the world positively.</p>

<p>Thanks, Vulwark</p>

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<p>Lless a problem of grammar than syntax. Why not “Open-minded, inquisitive and bold, they always…”</p>

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<p>Thanks for you suggestion. But, if you had to choose between the original 2, which one would you pick?</p>

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<ul>
<li>willing to try new things</li>
<li>to explore and feel the world</li>
<li>to dare</li>
</ul>

<p>is pretty much saying the same thing 3 times. </p>

<p>It’s a waste of word count.</p>