Grammar Question

College Essays
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<p>“She has never prevented me from taking risks and making mistakes in real life, in both my academic and extracurricular endeavors.”</p>

<p>Is this grammatically correct? or do i have to say</p>

<p>“She has never prevented me from taking risks and making mistakes in real life, whether it is in my academic or extracurricular endeavors.” </p>

<p>Thanks in advance for your help:P</p>

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<p>I believe both to be grammatically correct . I would choose the first one.</p>

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<p>thanks JODIEEE!</p>