<p>I think its pretty good, but i need a second opinion. any takers?</p>
<p>i’ll read it=)</p>
<p>ehh why not, send it over</p>
<p>I’ve never read someone else’s college essay before, but I think I would like to take a stab at it.</p>
<p>-raises hand and waits patiently- :P</p>
<p>Why not? :)</p>