Happy Snow! Why Yale Supplement - 500 char. Would someone like to read?

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<p>Hey! So basically I think it is very weak due to character limit and I could not finish strong because that sentence had to be short so the whole thing fits within the limit. Please let me know what you think? And if there’s anything I can do to fix it? </p>

<p>Leave a post and I will PM you :slight_smile:
Thank you so much and happy snow!</p>

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<p>PM me…i’m a SCEA acceptee</p>

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<p>You can PM me. I was deferred, so there’s nothing I can do to change the answer I gave them for that question.</p>

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<p>PM me! i was just accepted, i’ll be happy to read</p>

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<p>I can read it; already applied SCEA so no worries</p>

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<p>I’ll give it a read too if you want another opinion :)</p>

<p>Mine kinda sucks too, no worries.</p>

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<p>I’m a junior, but I’d love to read it!</p>

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<p>i’ll critique it</p>

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<p>If you don’t mind a 2014er, PM! I’ll give it a look.</p>

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<p>Rejected, so don’t know if you want my opinion. But if you do, I’m fine reading it.</p>

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<p>If you want someone who is there now to read it, go ahead and PM me.</p>

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<p>You’re so cheerful! :smiley:
I’ll take a look! I was deferred so there’s no going back :]</p>

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<p>Sure…i was deferred too :(</p>

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<p>I’d love to help. I was accepted early so no worries!</p>

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<p>I’ll read! I’m not even applying to Yale, so no worries, haha.</p>

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<p>Sure, I do not mind reading, I am also applying there. Pm me…</p>