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<p>Interested yet? lol
Looking for experienced readers to critique my “final” rough draft.</p>
<p>i promise it’s good :]</p>
<p>ill read it if you get mine back to me ;-)</p>
<p>i will be glad to read it and give feedback</p>
<p>Send it over!!</p>
<p>exciting! send it over!</p>
<p>I can tell it’s crap just by that quote.</p>
<p>I mean, have you ever heard of the infamous “climbing the mountain” essay…</p>
<p>that quote is quite noice!</p>
<p>may i see? pm it to me.</p>
<p>Actually, it’s nothing like climbing a mountain.</p>
<p>EDIT: anyone else wanna read?</p>
<p>ie: It was a long hard struggle… One time I fell down into a cravasse and broke my leg… but then I hobbled to the peak of the mountain just in time to see the glorious sun’s rim rising gently over the verdant plains below. And there, in clouds painted a dark maroon by the light of the sun, I saw inscribed the letters which were my ultimate destiny: VER…I…TAS</p>
<p>haha, i didn’t hobble to the peak. I made it my slave. There is nothing in my essay resembles “in the clouds, i had an epiphany.”</p>
<p>I do. Wanna send it?</p>
<p>Yeah, I’ll read it. Maybe you can read mine a bit later?</p>
<p>Let me read it!</p>
<p>“ie: It was a long hard struggle… One time I fell down into a cravasse and broke my leg… but then I hobbled to the peak of the mountain just in time to see the glorious sun’s rim rising gently over the verdant plains below. And there, in clouds painted a dark maroon by the light of the sun, I saw inscribed the letters which were my ultimate destiny: VER…I…TAS”</p>
<p>Honestly pawn, do you have ANY clue of what you are talking about? Sure there might be a lot of essays pertained to that certain topic, but I can tell you that some of the best essays I have ever read revolve around the “mountain” concept. And typically, the best have been very genuine and have been crafted very well. </p>
<p>But anyways aspara, I’d be more than happy to read your essay.</p>
<p>lol pawn’s little parody is hilarious. does sound cheesy from your attention catcher, but i havent read it so i cant pass judgment yet. could i see it, op?</p>
<p>email: <a href="mailto:srrinath@gmail.com">srrinath@gmail.com</a></p>
<p>i’ll read, pm me :)</p>
<p>bumpy lumpy sumpy
sorry if i didn’t send it you you.
i tend to scrutinize over your post history.</p>
<p>I’ll read it for you.</p>