Hawaii Appriciation Essay

College Essays
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<p>I Wrote an essay on my internship working at our Nation’s Capitol and how i’ve come to appreciate my home .I need a stronger conclusion and constructive criticism on the overall essay. Anyone interested? </p>

<p>BTW–is it too cliche? ahh i guess that depends on how I answered it…constructive criticism is need…help please?</p>

<p>thnx</p>

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<p>i’m from Hawaii too, i’m interested send me a PM :)</p>

<p>(i’m an 09er so don’t worry)</p>

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<p>thnx again–anyone else? the more the merrier ^_^</p>