HELLLP needed on the optional essay! Anyone care to read it NOW?!

<p>Would anyone be willing to give me some feedback on my optional essay? It’s the one about a risk you took…I’m having trouble getting it to where I want it, and the writing/wording is just sounding lame to me! </p>

<p>Some last-minute quality reading material…anyone? :D</p>

<p>sure, PM me :)</p>

<p>I’ll read it. I sent all my apps in yesterday, if you’re worried.</p>

<p>PM me. I was accepted Penn ED.</p>

<p>I have time. PM me.</p>

<p>I’d be willing to read it if you still want, just PM me. And I was accepted to Penn ED, so don’t worry.</p>