Hello im from Vietnam. Would anyone help critique my CommonApp essay?

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Hello I am from Vietnam. Im preparing for my toefl, sat and essay at the same time. I really don’t know who I can ask to read my CA essay in my area because my teachers don’t have much experience assessing CA essays and my friends are quit competitive so they rarely share CA with each others and don’t really agree to have a review over my CA. I know it is quit early to write a ps now (isn’t it??) but I have so many other things to take care such as toefl or sat 2.

Please help me to have a review I would be very grateful.
Thank you for reading my post :slight_smile:

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i will pm me :slight_smile:

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Would you send me your email? I will forward you my essay.
Thank you so much :x

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ill pm you it

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I’m also a Vnmese applicant lol, but I haven’t even started on my essay yet. Way to get a head start on it :wink: I can help you edit it.

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I speak, read, and write Vietnamese fluently, but I’m from the states XD… I could give you some feedback as a fellow Vietnamese-ish ;)!

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I can give you feedback :slight_smile: feel free to pm me :slight_smile: