<p>Please please please! Haha, this is for the extended essay question, and while I’m pretty happy with it, I’d love for someone who knows the ropes to read it over and give me feedback. I don’t want an extensive critique, because I the tone I’m trying to give off is very important in relation with the style the essay is written.</p>
<p>But I get a bit wayward and sometimes it’s common for me to just have too much, where everything is connected but scattered, almost, y`know? If anyone’s willing to bother reading this, and just give me a few hints on how to tighten it up, I’d be eternally thankful! Please private message me or drop your email. Thank you so much!</p>