<p>Hi parents. I’m a senior in high school and I will be applying to UCs. Can you guys please read my essay and give critiques?</p>
<p>I wrote my essay on a drink and I’m very nervous for choosing such a peculiar topic. The deadline is the 30th. And I would appreciate it if i can have it by tonight or early in the morning.</p>
<p>Please parents! Help me out!</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>