Hello Parents! I need your advice!

<p>Hi parents. I’m a senior in high school and I will be applying to UCs. Can you guys please read my essay and give critiques?</p>

<p>I wrote my essay on a drink and I’m very nervous for choosing such a peculiar topic. The deadline is the 30th. And I would appreciate it if i can have it by tonight or early in the morning.</p>

<p>Please parents! Help me out!</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

<p>Send it to me by PM.</p>

<p>That is kind of you, Marite.</p>

<p>Thank you Marite! I have sent my essay through PM. =)</p>

<p>Again, Thanks!!</p>