HELP a terrible essay writer

<p>I wrote an essay about Scatman John and I already know the essay needs serious work. I never have been a good writer (although I got a 99 on the english regents haha, but that wont help me now!) and I will thankfully accept and criticism and help I can get.</p>

<p>Can anyone help? </p>

<p>Thanks SO much.</p>

<p>Oh and I’m applying to pretty selective schools… I want to do something in business, but that’s irrelevant.</p>

<p>Villanova
Binghamton
Boston College
Lehigh University
Colgate University
University of Maryland, College Park
Bentley College
Boston University
Babson College
Providence College
University of Scranton
Fordham University</p>

<p>Thanks.</p>

<p>I havea few minutes if you send now, otherwise I can look later</p>

<p>thank you, brownparent!
anyone else?! =)</p>

<p>no one???</p>

<p>can anyone else look at it? edit it or anything at all?</p>

<p>Sure. Shoot it by me.</p>

<p>thanks a lot!</p>

<p>anyone else?</p>

<p>???</p>

<p>sure, i can try to help if you’d like.</p>

<p>I can check something over. im really bored :)</p>