<p>This isn’t a admissions essay but I need help. I need to write a profile of Chicago, it can not sound like a brochure and it must included all 5 senses. My first draft received an 5 because my paper want non “focused” on Chicago enough. What would you do?This isn’t a admissions essay but I need help. I need to write a profile of Chicago, it can not sound like a brochure and it must included all 5 senses. My first draft received an 5 because my paper want non “focused” on Chicago enough. What would you do?</p>