HELP!!! common app short essay !!

<p>Hey guyz can u plz help me out revsing my short answer?
Its just around150 words and i just want someone to look over and make sure am on the right track
I have to send it soooon so plzzz help me
ANyone??</p>

<p>hmmmm…I feel like you’re a little behind the ball on this one. If you’re a senior, I offer my deepest apologies. You’re not going to college. If you’re a junior however, there is no reason that you have to send it in asap. Chill.</p>

<p>It is for transfer admisson.</p>

<p>send to me gogo!</p>