Help editing an essay

<p>Possibly with cuts, mainly with tone and general flow.</p>

<p>I can send it in .rtf file or .doc file </p>

<p>Thanks for ANY help at all.</p>

<p>what’s the deadline? i can help you tomarrow.</p>

<p>if you don’t mind an extremely critical reader to read your essay
pm me then
i m applying to harvard too as a transfer applicant so yeah maybe we can exchange essays
email the essays to <a href="mailto:momo_yoyo@hotmail.com">momo_yoyo@hotmail.com</a></p>

<p>you can pm me if you want.</p>

<p>sure. pm if it’s not too late.</p>

<p>pm it to me i’ll go over it</p>