HELP, i think this essay needs divine intervention...

College Essays
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<p>I need someone to revise, edit, and suggest things without ripping me off;
No, I’m not applying to Harvard, or Princeton or Yale, but I’d like my essay to clearly define who I am and highlight my interests. Please, if you’re up for let me know.</p>

<p>Truly appreciate it :)</p>

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<p>if u still need someone, ill read it and give u feedback… i am indeed applying to princeton lol and i would never rip off anyone´s essay. how insecure must one be to do that?? i mean it is all about YOUR personality
that is, if you still need someone…</p>