help, i'm not even sure if this essay makes sense...

<p>title says it all. i wrote an essay and i’m sending it to yale and amherst and frankly i’m not even sure if it makes sense. can i get some readers to read it and tell me if you understand it. please, i really need help asap because i need to hand them in tonight.</p>

<p>i’ll read it</p>

<p>pm me</p>

<p>I can take a look</p>

<p>PM me if you still need some help.</p>

<p>i will read it as well. <a href="mailto:tyac.sg@gmail.com">tyac.sg@gmail.com</a></p>