Help make my engineering statement of purpose more effective please

<p>Didn’t get much reply in the essay forum.<br>
See what I should elaborate more on need to include please. I feel I’m lacking a paragraph for goals, in a way it’s sorta imply.</p>

<p>Also my verb tense are horrible. (-d, -s, -ed)</p>

<p>It’s for Texas A&M Petroleum Engineering.</p>

<p>PM/reply if you wish to help. Thanks in advance.</p>