<p>ok, im in a dilemma here. im applying ed, and i still haven’t send out my app yet. and the worse part is…i still cant choose between my essay. for the $10 one, i have like 5 essays, and theres two that i can possibly use. one is like an actual adventure, and the other is like, i went hiking, so its sorta an adventure, but the focus of it is more like on the lesson learned…not actually the hiking. and then, i was reading some stuff that laxfan posted about the essay, and it says, focus on the adventure. and my essay didnt quite focus on the adventure cuz it focused on the lesson i learned, but i like it better than my other essay which focused on the adventure…this makes sense i hope.
anyone with imputs…should i use the actual adventure one, or is the hiking one even tho the emphasis is not on the adventure??</p>
<p>I’m not a college rep. or anything, but i would use the one you take the most pride in, not the one you think colleges want.</p>
<p>yea very good pt, thanx.
anyone else comments?</p>