<p>I am having trouble with this sentence and not sure which one is better</p>
<p>I dread these appointments because of the overwhelming feeling of d</p>
<p>To me, the third is by far the best. The first one seems grammatically questionable (something about the with/after just doesn’t seem right), the second one seems contrived (experienced) - and the third one seems very stylistically pristine!</p>
<p>alright thanks alot I was leaning towards that one anyways</p>
<p>I dread these appointments becuase of the remaining overwhelming feeling of Deja vu I experience after each one</p>
<p>hmm I will take that into consideration, I will read a few to my friends and see what they think. Thanks smiley</p>
<p>I don’t think you experience deja vu after something happens, it’s one of those “in the moment” things. I’d say it would have to be something like “The feeling of deja vu I experience at these appointments makes me dread them.”</p>
<p>smiley-that sentence gets awkward with “remaining overwhelming”</p>
<p>how about -
These dreadful appointments never fail to disappoint, casting a shadow of overwhelming deja vu, with each meeting a new invitation for calamity.</p>
<p>ok Thanks for all the help</p>
<p>i like elsawek’s</p>
<p>Wow this is like SAT writing portion all over again.</p>