help me out by giving me another set of eyes

<p>anyone willing to read an essay I wrote for the UofC? willing to receive any comments that will help me improve my essay.</p>

<p>based on the “At present you need to live the question” prompt</p>

<p>let me know! Thanks! :)</p>

<p>yup. dont worry, i got in EA : )</p>

<p>AH that one looked like such a toughie. i wrote about the road for mine…
i can read it for you if you want. i got in EA and am currently bored out of my mind and will gladly amuse myself with editing other people’s college essays.</p>

<p>thanks guys! i pmed them</p>

<p>I attempted prompt #1 when I applied, but decided to go with the “Road” one as well.</p>

<p>I’d be glad to proofread. I got in EA, so no worries.</p>

<p>sure PM me :)</p>

<p>I’d love to read it too, if you want me too! PM me.</p>

<p>feel free to PM me</p>