Help me Review My Common App Essay

[Alpha11]

<p>Dear CC community,</p>

<p>I need your help with reviewing my Common Application. Its about a person that has influenced me please HELP ME.</p>

[Flamingdonuts]

<p>Sure, PM it to me :)</p>

[thekidizbak]

<p>same ill help</p>

[Alpha11]

<p>Sent Thank you guys</p>

[thekidizbak]

<p>sent it =)</p>