Help me shrink my essay - 3400 chracters to 2000.

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<p>I’ve written the thing, but it’s way long.</p>

<p>It’s currently ~3400 characters, and the limit is just 200 characters.</p>

<p>Someone help me shrink it:</p>

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<p>Friendly bump.</p>

<p>Is the real limit 200 or 2000 characters? If you really want to go into that much explanation, I recommend doing it in some other way on a separate attachment. I seriously doubt that particular item is meant for anything but the actual report.</p>

<p>There’s no way I’d turn that in as an essay.</p>

<p>I would completely take out the SAT paragraphs. </p>

<p>and the last one.</p>

<p>I don’t think they’re necessary.</p>

<p>Also, take out any sentences that say anything along the lines of “I would like [blah blah blah] to also know that…”</p>

<p>the reason you are writing this TO LET THEM KNOW. It’s for that purpose! you don’t need to write that it’s for them.</p>

<p>This is not an essay! What is the topic? Write about something personal or an activity that you are involved in. If you mention specific hardships you can relate them to your low scores, otherwise admissions officers do not want to read it. Mail a disambiguation of your school’s grading system to the college, try to have this officially from one of your schools administrators.</p>

<p>I’m so sorry people, I was so worried that I did not include the complete details.</p>

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Additional Information
If there is any additional information you would like our admission staff to know regarding special life or academic circumstances, additional qualifications, etc., please do so in the space below. You will have an opportunity to discuss your interest in Georgia Tech and write a personal statement on the following page.</p>

<p>Please limit to 2000 characters, including spaces and punctuation.</p>

<p>@gangster: Mail them as in physical mail or email?</p>

<p>BUMP. Help please…</p>

<p>if it makes you feel any better im an indian too. and i am in my junior high school year.</p>

<p>Definitely take out SAT explanation. You can’t explain away both SAT and funky grading system. The last large paragraph about blogging is also confusing and doesn’t help your case. Stick to any necessary explanation of your school system’s grading policies.</p>

<p>I would use this space to write a really compelling essay about your personal experiences and SPECIFIC hardships that you have faced. I would mail a physical copy of the disambiguation from your school, and if possible scan a copy and email it to admissions.</p>