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<li>How has your family history, culture or environment influenced who you are?
I grew up in a very closed environment where every one stayed inside of their niche scared to venture out. The Asians hang out with the Asians. The Blacks with the Blacks and the so called outcasts with other outcasts. This has influenced me to be a very open person and try to understand and socialize with all walks of life rather then discriminate against some one because of what they look like or how they dress.</li>
<li>Why did you choose to apply to UCF?
I visted and reasearched many campuses in Florida. I became really intrested in the University of Central Florida because of the Digital Media program. I spoke with some people in the program who told me how it was great so I then decided to visit the campus. I was amazed at how gorgeus the campus and thats what sold me.</li>