<p>I need some suggestions and feedback on my essay.</p>
<p>Please help me. Thank you.</p>
<p>I’ll take a look, pm them to me</p>
<p>thank you shb08, I pmed you. Anyone else?</p>
<p>Ok I sent you my thoughts. Just curious, what school is this essay for?</p>
<p>It’s for additional imformation and some school just let me attach an essay that I like.</p>
<p>Any one else?</p>