Help! Need critique stanford short answ. & UT Honors Essay!

<p>I need a bit of help with a UT Honors essay and if its on topic enough. It deals with religion, but I don’t think my essay is offensive, but I’d like another opinion.</p>

<p>Also, I have a 300 word stanford short answer. Post here if you’re interested in either and i’ll pm you the essays.</p>

<p>You can PM; however, I am also another 2014-er. UT - University of Tenn.?</p>

<p>Sure, pm me, i’ll give feedback!</p>

<p>I’d be glad to</p>

<p>Nah, I meant University of Texas - Austin</p>