<p>Hey guys.
I have two college essays that need proofreading. I would post them here for the public to comment but my English teacher always copies them from this forum and distributes them to the class so I want to avoid that. If you are willing to proofread and offer analysis of my papers or know someone who will, please send me a message via this website or through my email at <a href="mailto:tonysun12433■■■■■■.com">tonysun12433■■■■■■.com</a>. </p>
<p>Also I need professional, honest to god opinion on what colleges I can get into this year. My gpa is 4.34 (weighted). I have 10 aps and at least 5 dual enrollment classes (college classes). My sat score is 2200 but I am retaking it again for at least 2250. I am part of Masters program for YMCA swimming and I am the leader of several clubs as well as newspaper editor at my school. What schools should I apply to for early decision or action given my condensed resume? I want to go to wharton’s buisness school but they have ~9 percent acceptance rate. I need some advice on maximizing my chances of getting into a top ranked school, thanks.</p>