Help on an essay?

College Essays
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<p>its about my experience when i was in a boarding school last year in a village in Nigeria. Can i PM someone and have them look it over? its kinda long (~900 words) but im trying to cut it down a bit.</p>

<p>any help ?</p>

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<p>If you want, I could give it a look. I don’t have much on terms of grammatical technicalities, but I could try to suggest reductions if you want.</p>

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<p>I could. I’ll try and suggest reductions if you want me to. You need to tell me how muc you need it cut down to.</p>

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<p>thank you !</p>

<p>i’ll PM you soon.</p>