Help on BU supp

<p>Will someone read my essay and give me some feedback?</p>

<p>I started it and it trails off in the end. I don’t know how to wrap it up. I’m effy on the general idea of my essay too…</p>

<p>Appreciate it guys.</p>

<p>You can PM it to me and I'll read over it for you. :)</p>