Help!!! Proofread my supplement?

<p>I know this is sort of last minute, but if any current Harvard students/accepted students could look over my supplement and give me some advice? My essay is pretty unconventional so I'm not sure if it will throw some people off. </p>

<p>Thanks a lot in advance!</p>

<p>you're not last minute, pretty sure I was still doing stuff the day of.. i got into harvard although i went somewhere else, so PM it to me!</p>

<p>Anyone else? bump.</p>