<p>Hey everyone,</p>
<p>I need to write an essay for admission as a sophomore to a PSEO program at my local community college. I already take classes there, admission into the program would just mean that my district would pay for them and I’d be getting dual credit. Right now the essay is really wordy, and I’m having trouble cutting down some of the sentences. Would someone like to read over my essay and give me a few pointers?</p>
<p>Thanks in advance. :)</p>