Help with CommonApp Essay - No confdience left.

<p>Hey everyone, </p>

<p>If some people wouldn't mind giving me some feedback on my CommonApp essay I would really appreciate it. I already submitted it to multiple schools but after being deferred from UChicago and Georgetown I just wanted to get some feedback on it before I send it to Columbia and NYU. </p>

<p>Thanks!!</p>

<p>i'm willing to help... though i don't see why you shouldn't have any confidence :)</p>

<p>I would love to read your essay and provide feedbacks! :) Pm me</p>

<p>@YuhikoJay ya you're right, the title exaggerates my feeling quite a bit... I'm not that pessimistic ;)
@wcollege2012. Alright thanks! </p>

<p>I'll go ahead and send it along to both of you.</p>

<p>I would love to read your essay and help you out :) Pm me</p>