<p>I would like someone to give me some feedback on my essay on whether or not it demonstrates the fundamentals of good writing.</p>
<p>This is my first college essay, so any help is greatly appreciated.</p>
<p>Assignment Instructions:
Write an essay about the biggest decision you have made in your life. Make sure
your essay has 3-5 paragraphs and is 400-500 words long. </p>
<p>Please demonstrate in your essay that you know the fundamentals of good writing: unity, idea development, coherence, diction and correctness.</p>