<p>I have a rough draft of an essay written, but I feel dissatisfied with it for a number of reasons. Can anyone (in college or older) please read over it and give me any suggestions that they have? Thanks a lot :)</p>
<p>If someone would be willing to read over it and I could PM or email it to them, I mean:)</p>
<p>I am older (23) but I am not yet in college I will apply this year as an international , if you want you can PM me</p>
<p>You can PM me, but be warned: I am a HARSH marker ;)</p>