Help With my introduction; Am I going in the right direction?

<p>I just discovered New College a few weeks ago, and honestly I’ve fallen in love! I’m freaking over the essay though, I want to wow them, but I’m blanking! Am I going in the ‘right’ direction with this introduction, or for that matter any direction at all?</p>

<p>What I’m having trouble doing is finding how to relate my personal story of discovering the wonderfully close-knit eccentric, and slightly mad (all the best people are ;]) New College community to that of Alice. I mean this technically, not in content if that makes sense.</p>

<p>I used the Common App topic: Pick a fictional character or artistic work that has had an impact on you, and how it has influenced you. (Paraphrased, sorry I’m on my Iphone)</p>

<p>When asked what fictional character I feel the greatest affinity with, Lewis Carroll’s, “Alice”, unequivocally comes to mind. From my first read of both, “ Alice’s Adventures In Wonderland”, and “Through The Looking Glass”, in the 10th grade, I took a sense of whimsy and fantasy, along with an eerie sense that I had found my literary doppelganger. Just as so many other curiosities of my mind, though, I wrote it off as a triviality of a teenage mind. Thankfully though, rabbit holes can appear in the most unexpected of places and I rediscovered mine in the New College of Florida. In finding my own Wonderland I realized the entirety of my kinship and semblance to Alice, and discovered myself.</p>