<p>So at the moment I only have a little bit of an introduction written down and I need help expanding on it to make it into a great essay. please help!</p>
<p>Finding the right college for you is key. Its a saying that has been told to me throughout my college application process in high school. I enrolled in Borough of Manhattan Community College in order to both better my grades and save money. Now that I have improved tremendously, I want to transfer to a school that is going to offer me new challenges and prepare me for my future career as a lawyer.</p>